Played Chart : SPN

* 곡과 패턴이 어울리지 않다고 생각합니다.
* 곡의 전개가 자연스럽지 못한 것 같습니다.
* 패턴의 음계가 맞지 않습니다.
* 곡의 전개가 단조롭게 느껴집니다.
* 잘못된 노트 배치로 인해 연주감이 나쁩니다.

제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)

(SPN)
楽しいハピコアマジで楽しい(語彙力低下)
メインのメロディで使っている音が個人的にすごく好みです。
譜面ですが、単押し地帯での音階無視、NORMAL判定での24分か32分のトリル、16分の12(67)トリルなど、うーん？となる箇所がちょっと多かった印象です。レベル査定するなら☆10くらいでしょうか。

曲の構成に妥当性があるなら、曲が4分を超えても、さらには10分に近いでも一旦プレイできます。 しかし、この作品では、3:48ほどの説得力があるかどうかを混同しました。
さらに大きな問題はパターンでした。 HD(9)基準でメロディー展開通りにいかない混沌としたパターン展開がプレイしにくくなったという点は、この作品の最大の弱点として迫ってくるのではないかと思います。
製作お疲れ様でした。

MUSIC(125/300)BGA(0/200)CHART(50/200)FORMAT(0/100)SPECIAL(0/400)MINUS(-100/-400)BASE(200/200)TOTAL(275/1400)
PLAYED:Another
-気になった点
展開がややのっぺり気味に感じる
BGI/BGAの設定が無い
譜面の数が少ない
バナー、ステージファイル、readme、previewが欲しい
楽曲の尺が短いか、若しくは長すぎる

-インプレ
"繰り返しの中での変化があまり感じられなかったので、この変化を練られるとより良くなると感じました
コードとメロディーが喧嘩している節を感じましたので、ここが仲直りできるとより良くなると思います"

制作お疲れ様でした

Here's sys!
Thank you for your comment!This is our first time participating in the BOF event,So our work has many shortcomings (We are all middle school students, so we don't have enough time to prepare our works.I am only responsible for the music part）QAQ...But I will continue to work hard!Your evaluation is my greatest encouragement!I hope my works for BOF: TT next year will also receive your evaluation!

[7KEYS ANOTHER, or whatever it is as when I did the "therapy" on all of your BMS charts, the DIFFICULTY was not set. The file name of the BMS I played is "twinkinghope_hd.bms"]

3 minutes 54 seconds. It is too long, and the ending is quite unnecessary to take a whole minute for.
This music is actually a decent, basic, follow-the-textbook Happy Hardcore, despite the lacking of mixing skill (the effects are still noticeable).

I find the first 46 seconds of the BGA quite "pointless", especially when think3355's post is spinning around the background, and the patterns are so meaningless for my point of view.

Now here is my comment about the BMS (only the BMS I played is mentioned here):
1. I played on beatoraja, and there is a thing that I called "Note Preview Graph" (?). The overall Graph almost makes the chart look like a level 9, if those 2 "skyscrapers" don't exist. Turned out that there are 32+ note placement at #048, and an even harder one at #096. I don't think anyone, either keyboard or controller player, can pass those segments without losing combo. It's nearly unplayable.
2. Long notes. It's just my opinion, but the long notes in the BMS chart are quite unnecessary, as the keysounds themselves just last for 2 seconds at most. There is one very long note that goes through 8 beat segments (#050-#057), but when I intendedly miss that note, there is literally no difference comparing to when I hit the notes at the entire period.
3. Keysounds. I understand how you made the keysounds of piano, leads and drums. But why didn't you do the same thing for background, violin, guitar, plucked, and the "snare2&hat,fill.ogg" sound file? And each and every one of the said file you didn't cut is always having nearly as the same length as the length of the whole music work: 3 minutes 54 seconds. For context, the keysounds should be shorter than 60 seconds "to avoid the Lunatic Rave 2 Internet Ranking" filter. I played on beatoraja so there is no problem (it seems), but with Lunatic Rave 2 players, it seems to be a "fatal problem" for me. So, better make every keysound file shorter than 60 seconds.

These are the main 3 problems that I found and focused, and there might be more around.

And about the BGA, you said there was a BGA file in the BMS archive (and there actually is), but you don't know how to put it in the BMS file... Well, you have to mute the audio first, then "#BMPXX [BG file name]" and put the corresponding note into the BGA lane, and you're done!

That's it.

☆9をプレイしました。
BGAファイルが同梱されていますが譜面にBGAの定義がされていません。
また、.mp4をBGAとして設定する場合は音声トラックを入れないでください。プレイ環境により正常に再生されない場合があります。

曲が長く、繰り返しのフレーズも多いので飽きやすいです。
#048と#096の高密度交互押しはアクセントとして入れたかも知れませんが、楽曲自体が薄味なので悪い意味でここしか印象に残らなかった感じです。
個々の音のクオリティは決して低く無いと思うので、楽曲と譜面構成がもう少しユーザーフレンドリーだったらなあと思いました。

PLAY : ANOTHER

MUSIC : 300 / 500
CHART : 125 / 500

TOTAL : 425

곡은 어느 정도 무난한 퀄리티로 듣기에 문제없는 곡이었습니다. 멜로디는 취향과는 잘 맞지 않았던 것 같네요.
패턴은 음계가 이상하고 너무 단순해서 곡을 살리지 못했습니다. 그리고 LN 사용을 좀 더 납득이 되는 음으로 사용했으면 좋겠어요.

제작 수고하셨습니다!

- 譜面が曲を生かせなかった
- 曲の展開と仕上がりが物足りない
- 音階が正しくない
- 単調な曲の展開
- 演奏感のないキー音の割り当てとノーツの配置