0310   2021年08月22日 20:04 (ngc1oxxDP7Z/4sWD0UKR)

Sorry for the late comment... Interesting tune! Like Closer, please consider avoiding placing scratches and notes at the same timing. This can be arduous especially for BM controller players.

Telperion   2021年08月21日 11:00 (zyBTEBxiDVW8MpQVMcUS)

📀 music: 1.0/2 🎹 chart [DP NORMAL]: 1.5/3 💬 The song was a bit unpolished but still nice to listen to. As others have said, the charts aren't very considerate of the player's physical limits, but I found the DP NORMAL to be pretty fun. Also consider using patterning to highlight the shape of the melody or the chord progression. Keep at it!

STANK!   2021年08月14日 15:37 (RjYdYxDatCck75htowJP)

[N]雰囲気は面白いですが、メロや展開などがふわふわしている印象を受けました。譜面は皿LNが特徴的で面白いですが、24,25小節の急な密度増加は謎で、サビの配置はやや単調に感じました。あと、BACKBMPがBANNERに間違って設定されてしまっている気がします。

Sobrem   2021年08月10日 15:41 (bUXaK1cJxKarSmRLZQKR)

those amens and fxs are enjoyable, goes well with the bga. You can always try multiple chord progressions for a song. Also you're supposed to set easy judgement(#RANK 3), and not use keys and turntable simultaniously on one side, for all your charts.

Mister.Himi   2021年07月28日 17:57 (o4WDIas4tIbioGnDPgJP)

Thank you make bms.

L216   2021年07月27日 18:12 (5bkCmYG0NR8gBu5REEVN)

This song is really good. The BGA is beautiful too! However, I totally agree with Chazoshtare's point of view about the pattern, it may be impossible to play! Anyway, you can improve a lot, and I can't wait to see your future works as BMS. Thank you for your hard work~ (Ignore the problem about the DP ANOTHER chart)

Ogu   2021年07月26日 00:28 (2x5YE4bi9lR51rNQFwJP)

雰囲気悪くないのですが、ちょっと単調すぎると思ってしまいました。

Chazoshtare   2021年07月20日 09:34 (eBAfRLQWPCqlYv9d36PL)

Just like with your other song, I think it could use some more bass and you need to be careful with patterns that are physically impossible to play. Aside from that, a lot of potential in this as well!