[Played Sirius A]
I played the chart this morning and it was good, the music was unique,
and the BGA was tech-sique (unfortunately there are too few images).
But I have some doubts, why are there only two beatmaps?
I hope to see a more finished work next time, overall it is good.
Thank you for your hard work!!!
(Music/Charts/Movie:350/250/200,Thanks you for your hard work+100,total:900)

Thank you so much for your impression!
Thank you for such kind words too! This impression means a lot to me right now.
The music is unique mostly because it utilizes off-beat sounds (sounds have no specific grid).
The BGA was made in a rush, as I also had no idea what to animate and I wanted the BGA to center around the star, "Sirius", specifically "Sirius A" (brightest star in our sky, excluding "The Sun"). The BGA originally was supposed to also rotate around the star, but due to saving issues, it was instead static, so I'm sorry about that!
There are only two beatmaps for two reasons:
1. I didn't have the experience to chart that well.
2. I had to help the rest of the team.
These are lame excuses, but to me at the time this was really important.
I'll definitely try to make a much better work next year.
Thank you for motivating me today lol!

说实话，就论歌曲而言，对我来说还是很不错的，但是对于大众来说可能不太合群。BGA的话一般，中间一个蓝色的东西一直在那里，感到真的很无聊。list挺靠后的，感觉可能得不了太高的名次。

日本の言葉（自動翻訳）：正直なところ、歌について言えば、私にとってはいいですが、大衆にとってはあまりグループ化されていないかもしれません。 BGAなら普通、真ん中に青いものがずっとそこにあって、本当につまらないと感じます。 listはとても後ろにいて、あまり高い順位にならないかもしれないと感じています。

English:
Thank you for your impression!
The chart was made when I still was inexperienced with charting. I'm currently planning an overhaul on the charts.
The BGA was extremely rushed, because, this entry wasn't my priority for the BGA (my priority was 'Pessimistic Catastrophe' and 'f u n c [ A I ] ;').
Again, thank you for your time!

中文（Google 翻譯）：
謝謝你的印象！
這張圖表是在我對圖表還沒有經驗的時候製作的。 我目前正計劃對圖表進行大修。
BGA 非常匆忙，因為這個條目不是我對 BGA 的優先考慮（我的優先考慮是“Pessimistic Catastrophe”和“f u n c [ A I ] ;”）。
再次感謝您的寶貴時間！

日本語（Google 翻訳）：
感想ありがとうございます！
このチャートは、私がまだチャート作成に不慣れなときに作成されました。 現在、チャートのオーバーホールを計画中です。
このエントリは BGA の優先事項ではなかったので、BGA は非常に急いでいました (私の優先事項は「Pessimistic Catastrophe」と「f u n c [ A I ] ;」でした)。
繰り返しますが、お時間をいただきありがとうございます！

個人的にはこんな感じの曲が嫌いではなく、むしろ聴いているうちに良い部分が多いと思いました。
もちろん、曲の途中のサウンドのバランスが合わない部分は残念でしたが。
そして、パターンのぎこちなさが表れる部分があるようです。 特に最後のソフランとか…
制作お疲れ様でした。 どうか次の作品も作ってほしいです！！！

English:
Thank you for giving an unexpected impression about the song itself! I'm happy that I at least got some of the parts of the song okay.
The sound balance 'could' be interpreted as the infinity of space with a really distant sound, but then the counter-argument would be that sound doesn't travel in space (which could be counter-argumented with the fact that radio waves do travel in space). However, I did mess up on the balance of the volume for sounds.
I had an idea to make an ending that utilizes the BGA as a timer for when you must hit the last note. I sadly made the timer way too small and difficult to see. I'm sorry for that!
Thank you for your impression!

日本語（Google 翻訳）：
曲自体に意外な印象を与えてくれてありがとう！ 少なくとも曲のいくつかの部分がうまくいったことをうれしく思います。
音のバランスは、非常に遠い音を伴う無限の空間として解釈される可能性がありますが、反論は、音は空間を移動しないということです (これは、電波が移動するという事実で反論される可能性があります)。 宇宙で）。 ただ、音の音量バランスをめちゃくちゃにしました。
BGA を最後の音符を打つタイマーとして利用するエンディングを作成するというアイデアがありました。 悲しいことに、タイマーが小さすぎて見づらくなりました。 ごめんなさい！
感想ありがとうございます！

初めて聞くことで構成が分かりにくい場合がたまにあります。 この作品がそんな感じでした。 少し軽い感じのA、どっしりした感じの B、このように A-B-A-Bで構成されていましたね。
もちろんこういう風変わりな試みを応援しますが、パターンにおいてはこうした応援を色あせさせました。 Another(11)で Bass Drum音色を 1ボタン連打で置くことはリスクの大きい配置方法です。 そして、最後のノートトラップはここでは毒になったと思います。
制作お疲れ様でした。

English:
Thank you for your impression!
I understood that the button mash was a bad design when this work was registered but couldn't be bothered to change it. Please forgive me.
Also I think you have mistaken A with B. A is more difficult than B but this may be a translation issue.

日本語 (Google 翻訳)：
感想ありがとうございます！
この作品を登録した時点でボタンマッシュのデザインが悪いのは分かっていたのですが、仕方なく変更しました。 私を許してください。
また、A と B を間違えたと思います。A は B よりも難しいですが、これは翻訳の問題かもしれません。

日本語 (Google 翻訳):
「変えたい」と訳してしまいました。
「私はそれを変えたくなかったし、怠けすぎた」と言うつもりでした.
誤解を招いて申し訳ありません。

총 점수 : 225점
제작 수고하셨습니다.

* 음악 ( 총 25점 )
전체적으로 곡 전체가 전개가 너무 뜬금없는 구간이 많으며 곡도 개인적으로 취향이 아닙니다. 또한 중후반부는 드럼과 뒤에 깔리는 음이 잘 어울리지 못하는 것 같으며 곡 분위기도 그냥 잘 어울리지도 않는 것들을 아무거나 가져다 붙인 느낌입니다. 너무 곡이 중구난방이라 어떠한 것을 의도한 것인지 모르겠어서 곡을 어떻게 하면 더 좋을 것 같다는 의견은 드릴 수 없을 것 같습니다.

* 채보 ( 총 50점 )
* 채보의 개인적인 재미 ( 25점 )
* 채보가 최소 한 키에 2종류 ( 25점 )
* 플레이 가능한 키 종류가 2/3종류 이상 ( X )
* 가장 낮은 레벨의 채보가 5 이하 ( X )
플레이한 채보 : A
채보의 의도를 모르겠습니다. 비슷비슷한 배치가 계속 반복되어서 지루한데 마지막에는 변속낚시까지 있습니다. 다른건 다 둘째치고 최후반부의 뜬금없는 변속낚시의 삽입 의도를 전혀 모르겠습니다. 대부분의 플레이어는 대놓고 FOON을 노린 BMS가 아닌 이상에는 이러한 배치를 즐겁다기보다는 기분 나쁘게 받아들입니다.

* BGA (총 25점 )
BGA도 곡과 어울린다는 인상을 받지 않았습니다. 곡은 드럼비트 위주로 구성되어있어서 어울린다는 인상을 받지는 못했습니다. 단, 중간중간 분위기가 바뀔 때 BGA도 큰 변화를 주는 점은 좋았습니다.

* BMS 구성 ( 총 125점 )
* 아이캐치 ( 25점 )
* 프리뷰 ( X )
* BackBMP ( 25점 )
* 배너 ( 25점 )
* 리드미 파일 ( 25점 )
* 빈 BMS 파일 ( X )
* BGA를 제외한 용량이 100MB 이하 ( 25점 )
BMS 구성은 위의 파일들이 들어있고 BMS에 적용되어있을 경우에 주는 점수입니다. 가급적 위에 있는 것들이 모두 있는 것을 선호하기에 점수를 설정했습니다.

* 내 컬렉션에 넣고 싶은가? ( 0점 )
곡도 채보도 좋아하지 않았습니다.

English:
Understood.

한국어:
이해했다.

音乐: 210/300
谱面: 240/300
演出: 140/200
新手友好度: 140/200
总之辛苦了

English:
Thank you so much for the long impression, I am confused on how this entry gained 730 points but thank you anyway!

简体中文 (Google 翻译)：
非常感谢您的长期印象，我对这个条目如何获得730分感到困惑，但还是谢谢您！

長所

- 曲の展開が独特です

短所

- 音階が合いません
- 退屈な曲展開
- 曲が個人的に嫌いです

その他
- キー音のボリューム差が大きすぎる

製作お疲れ様でした。

長々と感想を書いていただきありがとうございます。

[コメント追記]

Played Chart : SPA

마지막 변속의 의도가 무엇인지 알기 어렵습니다. 곡 또한 백그라운드가 빈약해 심심했고 키음이 조금 끊기는 게 들려 아쉽습니다.

제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)

English

I have no explanation for the last shift that happens. (I was just a psychedelic trance fan)
The BGA was actually meant to be static, but I decided to animate a tiny little bit.
This was my second BMS I have ever charted, this explains why some of the keysounds are a bit off-sync.

Thank you for your time to write a long impression/comment!

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한국어 (Google Translate)

나는 마지막으로 일어난 변화에 대한 설명이 없습니다. (그냥 사이키델릭 트랜스 팬이었습니다)
BGA는 사실 정적인 것이었지만 저는 약간의 애니메이션을 만들기로 결정했습니다.
이것은 내가 차트로 작성한 두 번째 BMS였습니다. 이것은 일부 키 사운드가 동기화되지 않은 이유를 설명합니다.

긴 감상/댓글 작성해주셔서 감사합니다!

Played 7K HYPER.

To be blunt, it feels like a 2022 Cyclone Area work, only not as good.
Why is there a switch to hard psy that sounds like it was lifted from a loop or another person's keysounds? What is going on?
I like the drum machine style beat when there is one, but overall everything gives the impression of being slapped together carelessly.
Once again, it's sort of funny as an outsider work, but please try to learn about the basics of composition and song structure a little more. If you're going through the files of other BMS, I think you should be studying how they're put together, not taking keysounds from them.

The final score will be "2 out of 10".
This will use a stricter scoring system compared to previous years.
That's all for now.

As my second BMS ever made, I respect your point of view and understand the downfall of this entry.
As a fan of psychedelic-trance, I made a really blunt switch. When you mention everything is slapped carelessly, you aren't wrong, the drum style beat is actually just a randomly placed note chaos turned into a part of a song.
As this was made all the way back in July of 2022 (the song was finished), I had no idea of more advanced music composition and song structure. By now, I have some kind of small sense of that.
This BMS doesn't use other BMS sounds (except for the sweep-in).

Thank you for the impression though!
Have a nice day!