Song: B-
Pattern: B0
Total: B-

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Talk about going back to my roots: the vocals and the bass remind me of Muneo House that I used to listen to over 15 years ago. Meanwhile, the whistles and drums make me feel like I'm in a festival, which makes sense given the pineapples everywhere. A few key sounds were exceedingly loud, though, breaking the immersion a little. But overall, the music is exciting.

The ☆6 chart eventually became easy for me, but I was surprised by the friendliness the ☆10 chart (it's more like a ▽9, given that I can clear it once but not at will). I couldn't remember anything distinctive about the ☆10 chart, but I just remember it being fun overall. I highly recommend this song.

Thank you for your comment and hope you can try Lv.12 one day. (Actually it's more difficulty
About the Muneo House what you have mentioned in comment, I will listen it later.
And about the key sounds, I think the problem happened because I haven't mastered this song before I sliced the key sounds. That means the sound among each instruments maybe not smoothy. I'll pay more attention next year.

Again, Thx for your recommendation and your advice.

Haha, it'll probably take me six years to even start thinking about playing Lv.12s, but I'll try to remember to play that chart (and others by you!) by then. In the meantime, I'm only a 5-dan right now, and I have a 77 miss count (~7.7% of notes) on your Lv.10 chart, but since your song is quite fun, I'm looking forward to bringing down that number. Other charts around this same difficulty (Selenotaxis Lv.9 and Love Like Lv.9 come to mind) crush my soul right now, so I'm glad your Lv.10 chart fits well with my skill level.

Anyway, I'm delighted that you took the time to respond to my impression, and I look forward to your upcoming works.

Well, see you next year and hope we will both make great improvements at that time.

By the way, I just get 8dan in iidx (may be 7dan this generation because now 8dan has LAB (what I listen thousands time for writing TANYAO but can't even normal clear) and Sick (give my gigadelic back right now) so it's hard for me haha).

So in fact I can't solve my own Lv.12 chart. Perhaps I need to play more difficult chart to make a better chart (and the song itself).

It would be pleasure to chat with you. Hope we can meet on other platforms.

Since I couldn't find a convenient way to send you a private message, I decided to experiment with a group chat service called Riot. I hope a link appears somewhere in this response. It'll lead you to a "bms" room that guests can join. Maybe we can work something out from there. (:

Well...that didn't work. I put the link up in my LR2IR page. My LR2ID is 142848.

OK I got it. I'll try later on.

hmmm I‘ve registered an account in Riot but nobody inside in the chat room. And either I can't find a room named bms.
Is there something wrong? Hope to get your reply soon.

Schranz來說Hihat以及Ride的部分還不夠重, 全體的打體樂器應該可以再拉幾個sample一起sidechain(雖然切keysound會非常辛苦)
另外全體Effect來說可以再重一點, 除了filter外還可以拉其他glitch或者low frequency等砌更多gimmick的東西
相反地Gamelan要素相對有點薄, 全首高頻相對較弱的情況下可以用作補充
SPA是比較多轉盤的準備物量, 那個BSS除非有意圖否則一般不建議這樣做
嘛那個灼熱轉盤真的笑了w

製作辛苦了 ! 希望下年還能看到您 !

我來回復菠蘿了w

非常感謝在製作上的建議。這是我第一次嘗試寫SCHRANZ所以所有的意見都超級重要的
灼熱的皿一開始設計的思路是這樣的：菠蘿是熱帶水果->所以要熱帶->熱帶風情->YO！<(’ワ‘)>
做鋪上的意見也十分有用（其實建議打一下INSANE 如果沒打的話

（順帶一提切音之前忘記MASTER了 我罪孽好重啊！

真的非常感謝 配器上的 編曲上的 以及BMS製作上的 建議


by 潮音きつね a.k.a KRNK-xo

因为个人比较喜欢schranz，第一次满心期待地点开无BGA版之后的感觉是“哈？这是什么？”

的确音乐单独拿出来听的话会有点意义不明，但追加的BGA起到了非常优秀的引导欣赏和�攝F作用，让人怀疑是不是先有BGA的大纲，然后按着大纲作的曲（

具体来说的话，高度lofi的人声取样如果不加BGA真的很难听出是"pineapple"，其它部分也伴随着音乐的进度，把老式BGA的幽默感与行进感发挥得淋漓尽致，因此BGA给了最高比例的得分

谱面方面，前半有个别地方抓音不太明显，中盘的皿LN似乎对BM玩家有些恶意（没碰过BM不好评价），整体不错

谢谢您的评价！
其实本来曲子写到最后自己也觉得不像是SCHRANZ了（原先是打算做成the shadow那样的），但是又不大想向传统的那种SCHRANZ屈服（例如Lilium Records的Rusty Rainy或者山茶花系的那种），最后仅仅是在鼓的层面做出了微调。也深刻感到了自己在制作上的不足，日后会努力进步。
人声的部分其实有一点借鉴IIDX25的initiation（forever，forever），可能失真加太多了wwww下次也会更加注意的。
至于BGI的部分，只能说MiyA非常好的GET到了我的点并塞了一堆neta进去（大量被sue要素），制作comment或许日后会在评论区发送吧。
总之非常谢谢您的反馈~

by KURONEKO-xo a.k.a 潮音きつね
2018.11.13

感谢回复！人声的部分倒不是说处理得过了，就个人而言的话，不会特别在意能不能听清楚说的是什么，作为无意义的音节听也是有乐趣所在的，只不过这种可能需要视觉辅助来达到更好的体验吧，毕竟iidx也是有bga的（？

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The song itself is well constructed - it sounds and certainly feels like a punchy schranz. I still feel like it can be improved in a number of ways i.e. stack the layers, incorporate some saw stabs, or make it slightly more melodic.
The BGA is hilarious. Before it got updated I imagined it to be all sorts of crazy stuff, but I did not expect it to actually be full of pineapples - or should I say, Πなpos? Again, some improvements can be made - maybe the transitions can be smoother.
I enjoy the charts a lot. I reckon the another chart is a bit easy, maybe a higher overall density or more scratches will do.
Music 270/300, sequence 290/300, graphic 270/300, theme (how well the previous three pair up) 100/100
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Thanks for your comment and your advice.
About melodic, this time I tried to make "a SCHRANZ with precussion only". So it is lack of melody. And if I have chance to make a long version, I would try add something more.
Again, thanks for your comment.

非常感谢您的评论。
曲子确实有许多的不足之处，也非常感谢您的建议。其实这次是想做一个只有鼓的SCHRANZ的，所以在乐器的选择上去除了大部分的旋律乐器（最后加了303 arp和一点点的lead）。如果有机会的话，在长版里再慢慢加入新的东西吧ww。其他方面的建议也非常有用，学习一下。
再次，非常感谢！
by KURONEKO-xo a.k.a 潮音きつね