VERWIRRUNG
Land of My Dreams
LThirty6 (movie : 白竜神)
LastUpdate : 2023/11/26 23:35
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ogg: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RIYMSCg4ct0kJb3E3CUw43QXE_jSZozg/view?usp=sharing
wav: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1T9SnNN9aviSQRt8lB_36pv50ljlkmPQS/view?usp=sharing
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ogg: https://mega.nz/file/B1Y2BDSD#mFzWesRyumBAeCzemY6n4qYmUwqhC3FpAh6ly9Ajjgo
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(2023年09月30日 01:22 更新)
Pre-Reveal Update: Added a BGA, but at a cost of changing the contents of all BMS. It should be good though
(2023年09月29日 01:13 更新)
(2023年09月29日 01:12 更新)
Land of My Dreams
Team: Lemonade
Title: Land of My Dreams
Artist: LThirty6
Genre: VERWIRRUNG
BPM: 240
"Years have passed."
"I still wonder why did everything happen at the first place."
"But, there is no way turning back, right?"
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BEGINNER: Lv.5
NORMAL: Lv.9
HYPER: Lv.12
ANOTHER: Lv.0
obj: OfficialAz3
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This is my first work with a BPM over 200, and it's also quite an experimental (but not so experimental) one to me, as I have never done anything similar before.
Thank you for your support.
- LThirty6
My YouTube: https://youtube.com/c/LThirty6
My Twitter: https://twitter.com/LThirty6
Team | Lemonade | ||
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BMS Artist | LThirty6 (movie : 白竜神) URL | ||
Genre | VERWIRRUNG | Original・Self | |
Source | ----- | ----- | |
Title | Land of My Dreams | ||
Size | 142758KB | BGA | BGA include・Other |
Level | ★x5〜★x0 | BPM | 240 |
TAG | 7Keys Lang-US Audition-Sound Video-sharing Use-BGA Use-ogg Use-mpeg_movie Difficulty-intermediate Difficulty-senior Difficulty-craziness |
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GDrive ogg: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RIYMSCg4ct0kJb3E3CUw43QXE_jSZozg/view?usp=sharing wav: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1T9SnNN9aviSQRt8lB_36pv50ljlkmPQS/view?usp=sharing Mega.Nz (Backup) ogg: https://mega.nz/file/B1Y2BDSD#mFzWesRyumBAeCzemY6n4qYmUwqhC3FpAh6ly9Ajjgo wav: https://mega.nz/file/Bp5UVYBY#FGyWLb8ux71OgXTVwvarhAh7zR-dutwCTZd2xkxv_-c |
製作環境 | 非公開 |
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Regist Time | 2023/09/28 00:54 | Last Update | 2023/11/26 23:35 |
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(cQDulr0y6o/dOb6v.YKR)世界の花
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(Desi6qSJ1XRBhYHBRMGB)Black
(r57oF0RYi.iVldwsHgJP)Short Impression
Post Short Impression
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Long Impression
Played Chart : SPN+
악기의 음색이 멜로디와 어울리지 않습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)
[SP NORMAL+]
個人的には結構好きです
BPM240とかなり速いBPMの中でいい感じの旋律が見えたと思います。
譜面もできるできないとかじゃなくて、曲に合うやってて楽しい配置が多かったです。
コレは完全に個人的な観点ですがNORMALの☆9って感じが強かったように感じます。
NORMAL+の難易度を気に入ってくれてとてもうれしい!(As a charter of this entry)
曲を展開する際に強弱表現がもう少し際立っていたらどうだったかと思います。 特にClimax部分で迫力が足りないと感じました。
製作お疲れ様でした。
MUSIC:整体塑造的氛围感还是很良好的,但旋律编排稍欠存在不和谐走向感觉较多,导致听感一般,而且鼓的处理显得单薄了。
GRAPHIC:BGA配合音乐效果和各种处理效果其实凑合,在表现上略显粗糙,仍有很大进步空间。
SEQUENCE:谱面配合音乐演奏感良好,谱面分布设置合理,整体没有太大问题。
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祝好成绩,制作疲样。
MUSIC(125/300)BGA(200/200)CHART(150/200)FORMAT(50/100)SPECIAL(0/400)MINUS(0/-400)BASE(200/200)TOTAL(725/1400)
PLAYED:Normal
-良いと思った点
パンの活用や空間の使い方が良い
BGAと音とのシナジーが抜群
-気になった点
メロディーがやや歌いすぎか、音域が広く取られすぎている
ハーモニーがあちこちに行き過ぎか、鳴りがやや寂しく感じる
-インプレ
"豊富な展開が良いと思います
音がやや渋滞気味に感じましたので、帯域ごとの主役とメロディーの整理が実施されると尚良くなると思いました"
制作お疲れ様でした
PLAY : SP HYPER++ / SP ANOTHER+
MUSIC : 220 / 500
CHART : 275 / 500
+ BGA : 25
TOTAL : 520
회색 계열의 BGA가 곡과 잘 어울리긴 했습니다만 사운드가 전체적으로 꽉 막힌 듯한 느낌이 들었습니다. 전개는 문제없어요.
패턴은 충분히 곡과는 잘 어울리는 듯합니다. 하지만 난이도가 조금 과하게 만들어지지 않았나 싶기도 하네요.
제작 수고하셨습니다!
난이도는 실제로 과도하게 설정되어 있습니다. 트랙의 난이도가 너무 높아서 쉬운 난이도를 어려운 난이도처럼 플레이하게 만드는 차트 기믹(초보자 플레이는 노멀, 노멀 플레이는 하이퍼 등)을 넣는 것은 신성모독이라고 생각했습니다. 그래도 플레이해 주셔서 감사합니다! (As a charter of this entry)
very cool....
Personally, I think the song is well crafted and the BGA is really good. However, there are a few things that I think are not good enough and could be further improved:
1. The song is not well structured in terms of musical clarity, the notes are clashing together and they sound really unnatural and out of place.
2. The arrangement of the drums is poor and chaotic.
3. The lead sounds really cheap and unnatural, sound designing could be further improved.
That's about it, looking forward to see you again in other events!
*seeing
長所
- 譜面が曲とよく似合う
短所
- 曲の展開と仕上がりが物足りない
- 単調な曲の展開