イラストの雰囲気は音楽の雨要素もあてあってめっちゃ好きです
サビは感動するほど熱い展開が作れていたので
中盤でもっと汚くして不安定さが出せたら良かったと思います

音楽：★☆☆（音切りが安定）
映像：★☆☆（イラスト）
譜面：☆☆☆（キー音が聞こえない）
加点：+22pt

個人順位：78位
総合順位：424位

thank you for your hard work, maybe i will write some comments later.

PLAY | [ANOTHER ☆11]

MUSIC : 330 / 500
전반적으로 분위기가 미적지근하게 느껴졌는데 이게 꽤 매력적인 요소로 다가왔습니다.
전개와 사운드가 다채로웠고 또 멜로디가 괜찮았거든요. 다만 후반부 전개는 어찌 보면 정석적이긴 했지만 그래도 살짝 흔한 느낌이 들어 아쉬움이 남습니다.

CHART : 350 / 500
적당히 곡과 잘 어울리는 패턴이었던 것 같습니다.

BGA : 5 / 10

제작 수고하셨습니다!

Music(楽曲): 93/100
Sequence(譜面): 50/50
Graphic(画像/動画): 91/100
Bonus(その他):10
感谢您的创作.

[H8]
这个作品的优点是前半段，整体的配器比较符合氛围，较为悠闲。
但是黄6黄8蓝7很诡异，蓝7是E判，别的都是H判，打着比较费劲。歌曲后半段不知道为什么突然曲风一转，搞起了敲锣打鼓dnb，bass音色选择比较油腻。
我觉得全程保持一开始较为清新的风格比较好，相信作者可以在日后做出更好的作品！爱来自LiGaYb。

LiGaYb好！谱面的判定问题我不太清楚，可能是填写有误，很抱歉。曲子曲风本就准备写dnb，前面的铺垫可能确实会导致后面有点割裂。而bass方面，由于我音色设计不太好，所以做得比较粗糙。drop段bass想模仿水的感觉但是效果不太好。我会更加努力的，感谢评价！

[SP ANOTHER] POINT:65PT
这首歌曲的表现应该我认为作曲家比较好的一首，作曲上很有想法有一点潜力，在音色和旋律的制作上形成的氛围感，都比较趋向于标题“雨光”的感觉，也在尝试塑造良好和不一样的听觉感受。即使目前还有很多的缺陷，比如在混音上仍然是作曲家面对的一个挑战，25秒后的那个LEAD音色处理太过刺耳，在段落过渡上可能有些地方稍显生硬……我相信不断的努力将来一定会做出进步的！
玩了较简单的那个SP ANOTHER，BMS的制作配合音乐演奏感一般般，配置上的安排和组合有些地方有值得推敲的空间，难度梯度的设置合适，是中规中矩的BMS。BGI的制作比较浊气，大的感觉可以感受的到，比较契合音乐给人的音乐感受，在游玩时的视觉感受比较合适。制作辛苦了，也请务必加油！
Download time: 10/28

雨光/Rain Light

[作曲]
可以听出作者有一定的作曲基础, 作品的主要问题在于混音.
[混音]
我认为作者需要进一步了解混音与母带相关内容, 尤其是力度曲线/均衡/压缩/midi控制器等要点.
此外, 切音思路主要有两种, 先重排再切与直接切是不同的思路. 如果音乐作者与切音者不是同一人, 也需沟通.
成品母带版与key音bms应分开制作, 做bms本身就不支持母带, 因此需要对bms单独进行响度均衡处理.
[谱面]
"SPA2"和"Insane Plus"中有不少键型的排列还是较为美观的. 不过, 这些谱面中的长条使用较为随意, "Insane Plus"中更是频繁出现较为卡手的长条复合键型. 此外, 大多数谱面未标出子标题(一般需填写谱面难度, 例如"SP Another").

[composing]
It's obvious that the composer has his/her own understanding of music theory, and the main problem of the work lies in the mixing.
[mixing]
In my opinion, the composer needs to know more about mixing and mastering, especially the curving/EQ/compression/midi controllers.
BTW there are two main ideas of key slicing; rearrange and NO rearrange before you cut. If the composer and the key maker are not the same person, communication is definitely required; key balancing is also necessary as it's impossible to mastering a BMS.
[Chart]
"SPA2" and "Insane Plus" got plenty of nice patterns for play. However, the use of LNs in both seemed too casual, and "Insane Plus" contained lots of LN-anchor patterns that is so difficult. In addition, most charts are lack of subtitles (just fill in the name of difficulty, e.g. "SP Another").

感谢制作. Thanks for your work.
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I really like the sweet and gentle melody of the song. While it keeps swaying back and forth, it keeps gradually adding new elements making it interesting enough to keep coming back to.
The song is somewhat noisy but here it does add to the feeling of an old BMS that I can personally appreciate.
Played SPA. Normal judge? Really? That was sure a pain to AAA. Normal judge is fine, there's nothing wrong with using it, but the amount rolls SPA features made it significaly harder to time and transition into stairs and chrods, but I think I get what the charter was referencing here - Blue Grotto (青の洞窟) SPA.

Overall, I really enjoyed this entry. Thank you for your hard work!

Sorry for the mistake in game judge...And thanks for your like!

- 譜面が曲とよく似合う
- 演奏感がある

制作お疲れ様でした。