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thank you for your hard work~

PLAY | [ANOTHER]

MUSIC : 3.0 / 10
CHART : 3.0 / 10
+ BGA : 0.5 / 1

TOTAL : 3.25 / 10

사운드 자체는 꽤 근사한 곡이었습니다.
다만 전체적으로 멜로디 라인이 굳이 필요했나 싶을 정도로 곡의 분위기와 완전히 엇나가는 듯했어요.
그리고 채보 역시 내가 어떤 음을 치고 있는지 파악하기 어려울 정도로 배치가 난잡해 완성도 면에서 좋지 않은 인상을 받았습니다.

제작 수고하셨습니다!

[Music]
The music used Phrygian Dominant mode at first to provide a sense of darkness.
However, the motif lacks development and sounds somewhat repetitive,
and it became weird in the last section.
Although bass music doesn't need too much variation about melody and harmony,
we still need to pay some effort to them for improvement.
In addition, I didn't feel much about Rave genre in it.

[Chart]
For [SP ANOTHER], the chart is not balanced for LV10.
Some parts of the chart are too hard, and the Jacks and LNs are not well-used.
Perhaps the chart maker should play it first and then the problems can be found directly.

[BGI]
The BGI is nice and suitable for the EDM track of a music game.

[Intro]
"祝温中live音[永运]活着"? 请在公开作品之前检查文案是否准确。此处很可能是"永远"才对。