HARD RENAISSANCE
Everness
Cryo-Myosotis
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(2023年09月28日 19:42 更新)
Thank you for listening and playing, I am Cryo-Myosotis. There I bring my new Hard Renaissance Track: Everness. Please allow me to deliver some introductions.
This is a song inspired by a poem <Everness> written by Argentine writer, Jorge Luis Borges. I'll put it here in English and in Spanish (the origin was written in Spanish).
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There is only one thing. It is oblivion.
God, who saves the metal, saves the slag
and encrypts in his prophetic memory
the moons that will be and those that have been.
Everything is already. the thousands of reflections
that between the two twilights of the day
your face was left in the mirrors
and those who will still be leaving.
And everything is a part of the diverse
crystal of that memory, the universe;
its arduous corridors have no end
and the doors are closed at your step;
only on the other side of the sunset
you will see the Archetypes and Splendors.
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Solo una cosa no hay. Es el olvido.
Dios, que salva el metal, salva la escoria
y cifra en su profetica memoria
las lunas que seran y las que han sido.
Ya todo esta. Los miles de reflejos
que entre los dos crepusculos del dia
tu rostro fue dejando en los espejos
y los que ira dejando todavia.
Y todo es una parte del diverso
cristal de esa memoria, el universo;
no tienen fin sus arduos corredores
y las puertas se cierran a tu paso;
solo del otro lado del ocaso
veras los Arquetipos y Esplendores.
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In order to convey the ideas in the poem, I chose all the sound and instruments that brought me with the sense of "Everness", which could be everlasting and classical for music (resisting oblivion).
In mixing, I put all the main instruments in mirrored opposites to imply "Mirror", "Reflection". I try to use incisive sounds like synth leads and electronic guitars to contrast bright sounds like piano and pluck, to appear "Sun" and "Moon".
In melody, I try to combine Dorian scale and Harmonic Minor Scale to express my feeling when I read this poem: "quietness but large volume, energetic but constantly lossing......" Please forgive me that I could not completely express all the feelings with my poor language.
Otherwise, I try to avoid using large amount of sixteenth notes, I prefer rhythemic and disorganized sound, it provides me a sense of uniqueness and non-committalism. (In fact, I feel much boring with Sixteenth note's drop. XD)
In the end, Thank you for your support.
My soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/ryo-yostis
2023/09/28
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Everness / HARD RENAISSANCE / Cryo-Myosotis
SP NORMAL by Cryo-Myosotis // FINISHED
SP HYPER by AZVW_2 // FINISHED
SP ANOTHER by Colourful Train // FINISHED
SP INSANE by tyrcs // FINISHED
Website:
Cryo-Myosotis / https://www.twitter.com/yoyupond
AZVW_2 / https://www.twitter.com/AZVW_2
Colourful Train / https://www.twitter.com/adszxcqcv
tyrcs / https://www.twitter.com/tyrcs2
Team | Deadline Impact | ||
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BMS Artist | Cryo-Myosotis URL | ||
Genre | HARD RENAISSANCE | Original・Self | |
Source | ----- | ----- | |
Title | Everness | ||
Size | 37000KB | BGA | BGI(BGA) under construction・none |
Level | ★x8〜★x12 | BPM | 195 |
TAG | 7Keys Use-ogg Difficulty-beginner Difficulty-intermediate Difficulty-senior Difficulty-craziness |
DownLoadAddress | https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pgL-hQuVJREq2qo3fbVaeeGnvuRC2Uki/view?usp=sharing |
製作環境 | 非公開 |
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Regist Time | 2023/09/27 23:06 | Last Update | 2023/11/26 22:56 |
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Played Chart : SPA
* 곡의 전개가 자연스럽지 못한 것 같습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)
[SP HYPER]
シンセのイイハードルネッサンスを聴け委員会会長ですどうも
高速BPMに合わせたシンセのシークエンスが個人的には作風にかなりマッチしていると感じます。
譜面は☆10にしては高密度な地帯が多々あったので☆11が適正かなと思います。
曲の展開が伸びたわけではありませんが、起承転結がうまく表現できなかったというか… 展開部分とMixingでもう少し手入れをすればいい作品になると思います。
Hyper(10)は、最初の発狂部分とClimax部分を考慮すると、体感難易度が11中上~上級程度の難易度に見えます。 ジャンルの特性上難しいパターンが主ですが、Normal(8)を考慮するとアクセシビリティは若干低下する可能性があると思います。
製作お疲れ様でした。
Music [2/3★]
BGA [0/3★]
Keysounds [2/3★]
Charts [0/3★]
Favorite entry [+1★]
[5/12★] El equipo ha presentado un trabajo de baja calidad
MUSIC(175/300)BGA(0/200)CHART(200/200)FORMAT(50/100)SPECIAL(0/400)MINUS(-100/-400)BASE(200/200)TOTAL(525/1400)
PLAYED:NORMAL
-良いと思った点
パンの活用や空間の使い方が良い
メロディの品質が高い
打鍵感が良い
-気になった点
楽曲全体のノリがややバラバラ気味に感じる
BGI/BGAの設定が無い
調が複数あって喧嘩している
制作お疲れ様でした
PLAY : SP ANOTHER
MUSIC : 260 / 500
CHART : 300/ 500
TOTAL : 560
멜로디 진행이 거의 무조음악 수준으로 이해하기 힘들었습니다만 나름 개성이라 생각하면 그다지 나쁜 것 같진 않네요.
문제는 음들이 조화롭지 못하고 각각 따로 놀다 보니까 곡을 들을 때 너무 어수선하고 난해하게 느껴집니다.
그리고 개인적으로 패턴 자체는 기본이 잘 지켜져 있다고 생각하지만 플레이할 때 느낌이 다소 불쾌했습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다!
Cool. The charts (Normal, Hyper) were nice and although maybe the difficulty numbering weren't representing them properly.
長所
- 譜面が曲とよく似合う
- 演奏感がある
短所
- 単調な曲の展開