Speed Pop
Memorable Summer Voyage
L216
LastUpdate : 2022/12/01 23:05
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(2022年11月17日 16:48 更新)
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(1982年10月15日 17:22 更新)
Hello, great to see everyone again. I have something to talk with you guys about my story during my progress for this work.
I should have completed everything already before October, but one traffic accident and a broken left collarbone has costed me over one month of inactivity. "Memorable Summer Voyage" is the first work for this event, which should have been completed before the public appeal on September 1. But I left it behind to do my surgery on the left collarbone.
But the past is the past, here is the new bad entry of mine, despite a rushing time as I just returned from the hiatus. Of course it needs to have the BGA, but because of what I said above, the BGA will be done and uploaded later.
Also the BGA was thought of first before the music was made.
こんにちは、また皆さんに会えてうれしいです。今回は、この作品の進行中の話について、皆さんにお話したいことがある。
本来なら10月までに完成させなければならなかったのですが、交通事故と左鎖骨骨折で1ヶ月以上活動できませんでした。「Memorable Summer Voyage」は、今回のイベントの最初の作品で、9月1日の一般公募までに完成させるべきものでした。しかし、左鎖骨の手術のために残してしまった。
しかし、過去は過去、休止から復帰したばかりのあわただしい時期にもかかわらず、私の新しい駄作がここにある。もちろん、BGAが必要なのですが、上記のような事情から、BGAは後日アップロードする予定です。
また、BGAは音楽を作る前にまず考えたものです。
BMS:
1. 7KEYS BEGINNER 4
2. 7KEYS NORMAL 7
3. 7KEYS HYPER 10
4. 7KEYS ANOTHER 13
P/s: I should have used an instrument from Genshin Impact if I could be more creative, but I decided not to. 🤭
P/s:もっと工夫すれば、原神の楽器を使うべきだったのですが、やめました。🤭
Team | POSITIVE ENERGY | ||
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BMS Artist | L216 URL | ||
Genre | Speed Pop | Original・Self | |
Source | ----- | ----- | |
Title | Memorable Summer Voyage | ||
Size | 38474KB | BGA | BGI(BGA) under construction・Self |
Level | ★x4〜★x13 | BPM | 255 |
TAG | 7Keys Use-BGA Use-BGI Use-ogg Use-mpeg_movie Gimmick-LongNote Difficulty-beginner Difficulty-intermediate Difficulty-senior |
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[FOR ANYONE WHO DOWNLOADED THE OLD VERSION OF THIS ENTRY, PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD THE ARCHIVE. THANK YOU FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING] [旧バージョンをダウンロードされた方は、アーカイブの再ダウンロードをお願いします。ご理解のほど、よろしくお願いいたします] Original, long fade-out version (7397 KB, with "BGA in progress" BGI. BGA coming soon): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vsP0__01XTA0sPlatxMcMeM84lJ9o8G4/view?usp=share_link https://1drv.ms/u/s!AodogG7jJNekggWkQt4_jeIw_Yf_?e=6EAY23 Short fade-out version (31077 KB, now with the BMS BGA version): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YQdRP7NIzjknx-thFG868tC-WORn9Zui/view?usp=share_link https://1drv.ms/u/s!AodogG7jJNekggZzd4mbL-kwZZ0Y?e=C7VUtx |
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Regist Time | 2022/10/15 01:01 | Last Update | 2022/12/01 23:05 |
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Played 7K HYPER.
High-speed summer pop, with some sections that sound like Nekomimi Mahoutsukai shuffle pop, perhaps. With the tone of the kick and snare having not much low-end, it sounds like it could have been recorded on a cassette or something. (Is this intentional?)
The song is cute and well-written. The arp reminds me a lot of old gameboy Kirby music. I think the score ends up a bit low though because the frequency profile hurts my ears a bit, and the arrangement isn't that intricate - particularly when there's the main focus of a section is the same snare sample at the same volume, with a sine wave holding the same high note at the same time (seriously you could at least put some vibrato on that thing after a short delay, like old chiptune would probably have), it starts to sound kind of irritating, even though the summery mood is good. Tbh though I always feel like you are a fairly good songwriter despite generally scoring low in these events.
The final score will be "4 out of 10".
This will use a stricter scoring system compared to previous years.
That's all for now.

Synthでメロディーを絶妙に活用されましたね。 その他にも適切な音色をよく組み合わせた痕跡が見られます。
ただ、仕上げの部分では Drum Kitの中から Rideを少し混ぜるのはどうだったかと思います。
Normal(7)、Hyper(10)、Another(13)で 1:26秒からの 8拍連打がありましたが、この部分を Pianoに置き換えても大丈夫だと思いました。
また、#RANKは意図的な場合でなければ、同じように使用することを好みます。 この点、ご参考ください。
制作お疲れ様でした。

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곡의 멜로디가 조금 단조로운 면이 아쉽습니다. 패턴 또한 표기 레벨에 비해 많이 단조로워 곡을 살리지 못한 점이 아쉽습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)

- 譜面が曲を生かせなかった
- 曲の展開と仕上がりが物足りない
- 単調な曲の展開
製作お疲れ様でした。