民族的な電子音楽で音のキレも良く風味も感じます
最後の音調も良いですが曲尺が長く感じたので削れると思います
譜面のクオリティはいろんなパターンの配置があって楽しいです

音楽：★★☆（ジャンル・コンセプトが明確）
映像：★☆☆（イラスト）
譜面：★☆☆（キー音が聞こえる）
加点：+68pt

個人順位：32位
総合順位：257位

thank you for your hard work, maybe i will write some comments later.

Music(楽曲): 92/100
Sequence(譜面): 50/50
Graphic(画像/動画): 88/100
Bonus(その他):10
感谢您的创作.

[SP ANOTHER] POINT:44PT
歌曲给人带来比较不一样的感觉，既有传统原声乐器的表现，又有现代音色的组成部分，在编曲上还是有点想法的，但是现代和传统的结合出来的效果有些太生硬，尤其是现代音色的出现和点缀处理都有些太违和了，乐语言的运用上比较摇摆导致歌曲两者不像的感觉，而且整体编排上比较乱，听觉线不清晰，混音上有进步的空间，这就是编曲技术功底上的问题导致的弄巧成拙了，如果纯粹地选择了传统语言我觉得你可以做的更好一些。
BMS的制作配合音乐演奏感一般般，配置的安排和组合有推敲的空间，难度梯度安排只有一个ANOTHER难度的谱面，希望在日后的更新中有其他难度的谱面补充。BMS文件容量较大。BGI的制作还比较良好，契合了歌曲中的传统元素，在游玩时的视觉表现还可以。制作辛苦了，再接再厉吧！
Download time: 11/15

Ես շատ խորապես տպավորված եմ BGI-ում գերադիտման կիրառմամբ:
Ակուստի դիզայնը նույնպես ինձ համար անսպասելի էր:
Մաշկը քոր է գալիս: Ներեցեք ChatGPT-ով թարգմանելու համար:

C.H.A.O.S

I mumbled while playing ANOTHER that "It might be a decent Oriental Eastern Ancient Music". But it is so chaotic when coming at the end that I did not even know what was going on. And the genre is "Electronica"...

Wait it is actually "Electronic"????????

The reason why the music is so chaotic is because, perhaps, you have not heard of the so-called "chordjack", in which multiple notes being supposed to be in the same timing at different lanes or positions, but some are moved a tiny bit of beats forward or backward. Actually many people do not know what "chordjack" is, and unfortunately I happen to be one of them... Anyway, at some points there are like 4 or 5 notes which I later found out are the same instrument, dropping at the same time, and they together cause loud noises that I cannot identify what they are supposed to play.

ANOTHER itself is also lacking some creations in terms of note placement. I noticed that you did not use the scratch lane at all, while it is so potential for some types of note, for instance, the sequence at measure #017 and #018 is so good when you place all of those notes into the scratch lanes.

Moreover, I would like to point out some other issues as follows:
- Some part of some of the keysound files, most of which are nearly a minute long, are just "Silence of Nothingness". Take "perc4_000.wav" file as example. It is 53 seconds long, but the "audible" audio is only at the last like 3 seconds of the file. So what is the point of the remaining 50 seconds?
- The "RENDA", which is a bunch of notes repeatedly appearing at the same play lanes, is not necessary in this type of chart. Hence, what I have said above, lack of creations.
- You did not set the #DIFFICULTY and #TOTAL of the chart.
- This chart is definitely not a level 10. I think it is a level 12-, or even beyond 12.

So... This is not an "Electronica", I mean "Electronic" work, or technically so if you made it in a DAW (which I think you did). And to the chart maker, to be able to make a chart for someone else's work, you had better understand the music and how it "feels" (yes). That is all.

BMS: 4/10
Music: -40%
BG: No deduction

P/s: I did not even mention that this work had been frozen for 3 years. Why though?

- 曲の展開と仕上がりが物足りない
- キー音とBGMの音量のバランスが取られていない。

制作お疲れ様でした。