(2021年11月03日 00:25 更新)
Team: BMS Video
Genre: LIFE STREAM
Song Name: Perseids
Artist Name: Alex Turell
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5KEYS HYPER ★9
[I know those feeling of yours. Your pain, your wish, your determination... Yes, those are the feelings of a man who wants to find a meaning to his life. But even if you desire to surf the stars above to reach up to the gods of the universe, will your wish actually become true? Think about it.]
Here it is, guys! My entry for BOFXVII, Perseids! This track is highly inspired by xi's works, especially Halcyon! Heck, he is one of the several reasons that i'm making music and partaking in BMS events in the first place. (Fun Fact: I originally intended in publishing this on Halcyon's 11th Anniversary.) As such, i made this song as some kind of tribute to his godlike works. And speaking of tributes, i'm working on another song that's going to be a tribute to the work and legacy of the dearly departed SHIKI, who sadly passed away this July.
Also, yes, my mixing still sucks to no end. :(
Also also, if you're reading this, xi様!!! あなたの作品が大大大大大好きですよおおおお!!! XD
That's all. Thank you for coming to my TED talk.
Special thanks: xi (for making Halcyon and many other godlike tunes, and for being one my many inspirations to why i make music), yama-ko (for creating the legendary BGA for Halcyon.)
|BMS Artist||Alex Turell URL|
Use-BGA Use-ogg Use-wmv_movie Gimmick-LongNote Gimmick-Stop Difficulty-intermediate Difficulty-senior
|Regist Time||2021/10/28 23:03||Last Update||2022/01/19 23:42|
Post Short Impression
Song: 2 / 20
Pattern: 4 / 20
Comment: 너무 많은 소리가 겹쳐져서 도저히 곡을 들을 수가 없음.
해당 평가는 최초 등록 직후의 파일로 평가되었습니다. 제작 수고하셨습니다!
Played pattern: A7
Keysound Objects: 2.5/7.0
Total points: 3.5
Final PTS: 1.03 (F)
Comments: #000에 노트를 배치하지 마시오. 음계가 거의 준수되지 않고, 연타의 배치가 기묘하며, 스톱의 활용도 납득하기 어렵다.
제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)
If the mix had more definition to allow the leads cut through the mix more clearly, this could potentially be a really cool hard renaissance style song. There is a foundation here at least, but the execution is lacking. I think for your next song, you should think harder about what you want to prioritize in your mix, and go for a bit of a "less is more" approach to allow specific elements to shine more.
Normal(5), Hyper(9) ともに Long Note + Note または LN+LN の組み合わせを積極的に使いすぎました。 体感難易度はそれぞれ7、10程度と考えています。
The overall feeling of being wet is too strong. The result is that the melody line is buried.
Normal(5) and Hyper(9) both used Long Note + Note or LN + LN combinations too aggressively. I think the level of difficulty is 7 and 10, respectively.
The articulation of the bar line was good, but personally, I think it is better to strengthen the music and patterns that are the basic elements a little more.
Thank you for making BMS. (translated by Google)
Overall: 619/1000 (Music + Movie + Pattern + Basic Score (100 points))
Only leaving comment because I am in the team.
The fatal problem that may make this entry deep into the bottom is the chart. You must not put the notes on the first 4~8 beats.
Thank you for your hard work. And good luck~