Song: 5 / 20
Pattern: 2 / 20
Comment: 곡에서는 멜로디가 미묘하게 불협으로 구성되는 것과 악기의 디테일함이 아쉬움이 있었고, 패턴의 경우에는 제목도 적히지 않은 패턴을 선등록했다는 점에서 큰 감점을 적용함.

2차등록 악곡의 경우, 저만의 룰로 인해 점수가 100점 낮게 제출됩니다. 해당 평가는 최초 등록 직후의 파일로 평가되었습니다. 제작 수고하셨습니다!

Played pattern: I7
Music: 2.0/7.0
Pattern: 0.5/7.0
Keysound Objects: 1.5/7.0
Others: -1.0 ((-1.5) missing title (0.5) base file?)
Total points: 3.0
Final PTS: 1.06 (F)
Comments: 패턴은 이상한 완급조절, 음계무시, 곡과 맞지 않는 1번 축 등 악곡을 전혀 고려하지 않고 만든 것 같기에 점수를 줄 수 없다.
제작 수고하셨습니다. (Thank you for your hard work.)

You forgot to fill out #TITLE, so it is impossible to view the song in beatoraja's song list. A lot of people may also ignore your entry entirely because it looks like an error or broken file. Regarding the song, it starts out nice, but once the trance parts starts it becomes obnoxiously loud and noisy. It almost sounds like the song is clipping, and the mixing is quite poor. I can hardly make anything out. I think there are some technical qualities here that you need to improve, such as the keysound cutting (making sure everything is nicely balanced) and mixing aspects.

… タイトルから知りたくなる作品でした。
製作お疲れ様でした。

Music: 157/405
Pattern: 51/270
Played: Yes
Overall: 377/1000 ((Music + Pattern) * 1.33 + Basic Score (100 points))

Why...
No title.
Almost empty at the first half.
Badly chaotic at the second half.
Melody is decent, but the rest is not really good, even with piano.
And the chart is not a level 9.
Why???

Thank you for your hard work.