(2024年07月11日 00:33 更新)

こんにちは！forever aspireと申します。
これは私の初めてのBMSイベントです。
楽しんでくれたら嬉しいです！

（おおっ、これは独特な味だ。industrialな味付けが濃いけど、メロディ要素もある。独特だ。
万人受けする味ではないかもしれないが、店主の強い拘りが見える。魂とでも言おうか。印象的な味だった。）

ごちそうさまでした。

thank you for your hard work, maybe i will write some comments later

やあやあ、少年。
ボクの名はメル・テュフレット、しがない魔導師の端くれさ。
少年の送ってきた術式だが、ボクには理解できなかった。
すまない、でもこれに関してはボクは何も言えない。
それではここらへんで失礼するよ。

This song features a familiar melody and has a strong overall style that catches the ear. The enhanced drum performance makes the rhythm stand out prominently. However, the arrangement is relatively simple, and the auditory effect is somewhat limited, making it less engaging over time. If you’re satisfied with this BMS production, keep up the effort and continue improving!

- The song is in double-time, which makes it feel too fast to soak in any ambience
- In general, the soundkit used is pretty simple, which hurts its ability to convey an ambient soundscape. It may be helpful to look for sample packs with drones and such, as well as messing with FX to create new sounds
- I could not tell what sort of ambience the melody was trying to convey. The genre is "industrial ambient" but the song is written like an attempt at happycore, I thought. Because the soundscape choices are not convincing of any setting, it's hard to figure out the intent here (I apologize because I don't intend to be discouraging but after machine translation this might come off harsher than intended)
- BGI is good though