Shattered Identity
Never A Good Fate
816ThreeNumbers (816ThreeNumbers) (movie : shadow_bling)
LastUpdate : 2020/12/25 19:13
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Her story begins......
Music: 816ThreeNumbers
BGA: shadow_bling
BMS: 816ThreeNumbers
目光消逝,星空将离你而去。
追寻一切,却只在遮盖光线。
孤寂之悲,回忆已不再归来。
爱与世界,挣扎下逐渐忘却。
一切,早已结束。
Normal: ★x5
Hyper: ★x8
Another: ★x12
Insane: ★18
Team | Team Fellctesse | ||
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BMS Artist | 816ThreeNumbers (816ThreeNumbers) (movie : shadow_bling) URL | ||
Genre | Shattered Identity | Original・Self | |
Source | ----- | ----- | |
Title | Never A Good Fate | ||
Size | 70600KB | BGA | BGA include・Self |
Level | ★x3〜★x18 | BPM | 220 |
TAG | 7Keys File-Modify Audition-Sound Video-sharing Use-ogg Gimmick-Stop Difficulty-intermediate Difficulty-senior Difficulty-craziness |
DownLoadAddress | https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ao64dHD88YiOlAd1ZPjnLjBD94uXV8Nf/view?usp=sharing |
製作環境 | DTM |
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Regist Time | 2020/10/22 00:59 | Last Update | 2020/12/25 19:13 |
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攻撃的でカッコイイ楽曲でした。
ムービーからもストーリー性を感じ取れます。
SPH・SPAをプレイしました。
音楽ゲームは演奏感が大事になってくると思うのですが、
この譜面からはそういった要素が感じ取れませんでした。
色々な作品を参考に譜面作りの基本を学んでみるのも良いかもしれません。
制作お疲れ様でした。
Played pattern: I
Music: 3.0/7.0
Pattern: 1.0/7.0
Keysound Objects: 2.0/7.0
Others: -1.0 (Cannot Register IR (-1))
Total points: 5.0
Final PTS: 2.54 (D-)
Comments: 동봉패턴에서 기믹을 사용하는 경우 MAXBPM이 되도록 기믹을 연구한 후 넣는 것이 가장 좋습니다. 기믹 패턴의 경우 곡의 강약에 맞추어 사용하면 타건감이 극대화되는 효과를 가집니다. 하지만 이 작품의 경우는 곡의 강약과 관계없이 무작위로 BPM이 변하는 느낌이기에 타건감을 오히려 해치개 되어 대단히 아쉬웠습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다! (Thank you for your hard work.)
Song : 7 / 9
Pattern : 6 / 10 (SPA, SP ENDGATE)
BGA : 8 / 10
강렬한 사운드가 잘 살아있는 괜찮은 곡이었습니다. 패턴의 경우 SPA가 배치가 약간 아쉬운 편이었습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다!
Well, it's more otogecore. The first half is good (very cool hardtek drop) but the rest of the song has some weirdness.
I think the arrangement in the orchestral section in the middle sound incomplete. It'll sound better if you have more parts and layers like a real orchestra for sonic fullness.
In the BMS version, the chorus suddenly has an awkward jump in volume, and this bugs me especially because the saw lead is annoyingly screamy. I think having the exact same pitch envelope at the start every time sounds unnatural, it will be better if you can automate that, have some notes be legato instead, etc.
I think both these problems (arrangement and questionable lead) are present in the first half too, it's just not as noticeable because they're not what's at the forefront of the song at that time.
Played the 7K HYPER. The staccato strings as LN makes no sense, please don't do that. Otherwise the pattern is pretty fun, but much harder than level 8.
起承転結が引き立って見えた作品だったと思います。少しは恐怖感が感じられるBGAが印象深かった。
製作お疲れ様でした。
翻訳機を使用していました。
どうしてネタ譜面にしてしまったのか…。別にちゃんとした譜面も作ってほしかったです。
A譜面じゃ叩きたい音が入っていないし、譜面がちゃんとしていれば970くらいつけてました。
また、N譜面はH譜面と大して難易度が変わらないのでもっと削るべきかと思います。
本当にI譜面はちゃんとしたやつを作った方がよかったのでは…と思うほど良い曲だと思います。
Thanks for your comment! I'll try my best to avoid these issues next time :D
I wanted to add an additional comment because I really wanted to add a few words.
When I tried to make a chart, I couldn't quite make it because the kick sound was put together, so I know it's a hassle, but I'd be happy if you could cut the sound off as much as possible.
Of course! I'll definitely make it clearer next time :p
Music: 874/1000
Movie: 857/1000
Pattern (7KEYS NORMAL + 7KEYS HYPER): 858/1000
Overall: 865.0/1000
A Spectacular Fate?
Thank you for your work uwu.
Thanks for your comments :D
最初は曲を聞いて 「うわぁ、これは危なくない? 草」 と思いました。 実に傑作。
Normalプレイしました。 BGAとパターンが調和するのも好きだし、初めての参加作だということが信じられませんでした。 最高!!これからも期待します!
制作お疲れ様でした!
Thanks for your comments!
Yes, this is my first participation... and perhaps I still have a lot to learn. But trust me, next time we will be better than this!
(And sorry because I don't know Japanese)