> - The intro is cute. The song's setting sounds very influenced by future bass and the melodies are all quite nice.
> - Personally, a bass you'd hear in UKHC may be a better fit than the current synth bass? In general, the bass area is my biggest uncertainty about the song. It sounds like you have both a bass pad and a bass synth going on and the result is rather muddy. Stronger sidechaining and better volume leveling can help.
> - The songwriting is already good, so I think the most important goal here is learning to get the production to "feel" right for EDM. I think learning more about drum and percussion mixing will also go a long way toward this.
> All scores will use the same fairly strict scale this time, regardless of class. (I apologize as scores for some classes may feel harsh...!)