> - I like the switch to a more action game-like melody near the end. However, the bass seems to use notes outside the chord in ways that don't sound quite natural, so be careful.
> - During the drop, it sounds like the emphasis is entirely on the bass patches and I can't hear the drums cut through them, which is unfortunate (although the bass pattern itself sounds cool). In general, the kick may be too soft.
> - The choice between only a simple chart and a really difficult HARD judge pattern is rather rough.
> - Overall it gives the impression of an early attempt. The direction is clear and I think the basic understanding of songwriting is there, so from here I would say to study the arrangement and mixing of reference tracks more.
> All scores will use the same fairly strict scale this time, regardless of class. (I apologize as scores for some classes may feel harsh...!)