> - First and foremost, I think the synth lead needs automation of pitch and vibrato. As is, it sounds too cheap and static, which is immersion-breaking in an ambient song. It is also rather loud. Subtle sidechaining of the lead from the kick may improve it too.
> - The concept itself is interesting. The plucks, droplets and clock noises are all pleasantly silly textures and give the song a playful feeling, and it's fun how unpredictable the chords are. It is unfortunate that the high volume of the lead covers up the other elements so much!
> All scores will use the same fairly strict scale this time, regardless of class. (I apologize as scores for some classes may feel harsh...!)