"Against Child Violence" Music
Unacceptable Brutality
Deadline Hater (movie : Astronoo)
LastUpdate : 2020/12/20 23:11
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(2020年11月19日 23:25 更新)
[Announcement: Recently I have not been able to contact with Astronoo (the movie maker for this entry) yet, so there is still no background animation in the BMS patterns. Impressions for the entry are still open, so if you want to impress before the BGA/BGI release, go ahead. I will not regret it, because I will keep my positive energy. Meanwhile, I will still try to contact with Astronoo so that the project will be completed. Thank you for your attention.]
[Notes: I want a fair-play world of BMS, so before leaving your impression, please make sure that you have played at least one pattern from the entry before, and I recommend you to tell what pattern you played to make sure. If not, I will automatically confirm that you played the hardest pattern. Thank you for your attention. The following is the introduction of the entry.]
Child Violence. It is the word I would like to mention most in 2020.
In 2020, beside COVID-19 pandemic, multiple natural disasters and terrorist attacks, violence is also a must-to-mention topic, especially on children, who has rights to live, to play, to study, and to enjoy their beautiful childhood, but cannot. In 2020, through newspaper online as well as offline, I read a lot of cases about children being brutally tortured by their nannies, teachers, stepparents, or even their parents. Many children tragically died because of these violent punishment. In this introduction, I will not state any specific case or example of this kind of violence, but mostly, the reasons are because their children did something that make them angry and unbearable, or because they want to teach their children by currying, which is believed to bring the highest possible efficiency, or surprisingly, because they enjoy doing it... But anyway, this kind of violence, along with other kinds of violence, must be stopped, by any way we can. For the future of children, who will be the world's tomorrow.
[感想を書く際の注意点です。私はBMSのフェアプレーな世界を望んでいるので、感想を残す前に、過去のエントリーから1パターン以上プレイしたことがあるかどうかを確認し、念のためにどのパターンをプレイしたかを伝えることをお勧めします。そうでない場合は、私が自動的に一番難しいパターンをプレイしたと確認させていただきます。ご清聴ありがとうございました。以下、エントリーの紹介です。]
子どもの暴力。2020年に最も言及したい言葉です。
2020年、COVID-19のパンデミックや複数の自然災害、テロ攻撃の横で、特に、生きる権利、遊ぶ権利、学ぶ権利、美しい子供時代を楽しむ権利を持ちながら、それができない子供たちに対する暴力も、注目すべきテーマです。2020年には、オフラインだけでなくオンラインの新聞を通じて、乳母や教師、義理の親、さらには親から残忍な拷問を受けた子どもたちの事例を多く目にします。このような暴力的な仕打ちのために、多くの子どもたちが悲劇的に亡くなっています。この紹介では、この種の暴力の具体的な事例や例は述べませんが、大抵の場合、子供が何かをしたことで怒りを覚え、耐えられなくなったからとか、カレーを食べさせて子供に教えたいからとか、効率が一番良いとされているカレーを食べさせたいからとか、意外と楽しいからとか......。しかし、いずれにしても、この手の暴力は、他の種類の暴力と一緒で、どんな方法であれ、止めなければなりません。世界の明日を担う子供たちの未来のために。
Patterns:
1. This is not supposed to be a brutal punishment for education, only pain (これは教育のための残虐な罰ではなく、苦痛だけを与えることになっている) - 7KEYS NORMAL 5
2. Medieval Brutality (中世の残虐性) - 7KEYS ANOTHER 14
Platforms:
Music: FL Studio 12 Demo Edition, iBMS BMS Creator Delta 3.0.5
Edit: woslicer III
Patterns: iBMS BMS Creator Delta 3.0.5
Testplay: BMIIDXView2015, Lunatic Rave 2 version 100201
Team | POSITIVE ENERGY | ||
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BMS Artist | Deadline Hater (movie : Astronoo) URL | ||
Genre | "Against Child Violence" Music | Original・Self | |
Source | ----- | ----- | |
Title | Unacceptable Brutality | ||
Size | 72845KB | BGA | BGI(BGA) under construction・Other |
Level | ★x5〜★x14 | BPM | 64-259 (64) |
TAG | 7Keys Gimmick-LongNote Difficulty-intermediate |
DownLoadAddress | https://1drv.ms/u/s!AodogG7jJNekfk3YAf6YO_0KUOA?e=SkLMlI (2 7KEYS patterns) |
製作環境 | 非公開 |
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Regist Time | 2020/11/03 17:11 | Last Update | 2020/12/20 23:11 |
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Blue-J 
(ZIzB6CKQpRaCjCZp0oKR) last 
(rgeGJYS4XyF.xDCZCMJP) Trantech 
(djZg1rk7wZqNRh4lDIJP) M-kani 
(fD6q6tuIJLJyfkDu2gJP) 八木唯 
(dPCvAqJMzy4TRkADzMCN) 1/8 
(MuaBIz781qf/FwBOZYJP) Moca 
(CGcYAheE3lj3dMLBXsKR) kairos22 
(Bqrl4KNe9ipJISnxVIUS) えーえいちぜろ 
(FztFulJ42muBV39sfwJP) Routine 
(XJkslAz81lt67TJRr.JP) さんわり 
(tHi4pD0UqO64i8NtsgJP) Black 
(4EnJtYUUrj1JqV1VQcJP) Short Impression



































Post Short Impression
Long Impression
Song : 5 / 9
Pattern : 0 / 10 (SPN, SPA)
BGA : 2 / 10 (미완성)
슬픈 멜로디쪽을 쓰는 데에 일가견이 있으신 것 같습니다. 하지만, 악기의 문제가 너무 여실히 느껴지고 드럼비트도 단조롭다고 생각이 들었습니다.
패턴의 경우에는 상태가 지나치게 안 좋았습니다. 패턴 2개 간의 난이도 간극이 너무 크고, 심지어 SPA는 판정도 HARD여서 클리어 자체가 불가능한 수준이었습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다!
플레이와 감동에 감사드립니다. 정말 감사합니다.
이 노래가 잔인하고 어둡지 않다는 건 인정할 수 있으니까 ...
[Google Translate]

[N]I was waiting for BGA to be created but it seems that it's not coming so I'm going to make impression. The atmosphere of the song was nice and emotional, and the BPM change seemed to be giving some good accent to the pattern. Some percussion sounds were great but piano and some other percussion seemed a bit light. Though, as a whole, I thought the work was great!
Sorry for the BGA making, I have lost contact to Astronoo.
Thank you very much for your play, impression, advice (and waiting). I strongly appreciate that.
It is legit for me because when I did that song, I wasted my time. That was a huge mistake that would cost me a lot. I am planning to remake this song with a more brutal and darker way...
Played pattern: N
Music: 5.0/7.0
Pattern: 3.0/7.0
Keysound Objects: 3.0/7.0
Others: 0.0
Total points: 11.0
Final PTS: 5.00 (C)
Comments: 지금도 세계 곳곳에서 자행되고 있는 아동폭력에 대해 반대하는 취지를, 특유의 멜로디와 전개로 잘 나타낸 점은 높게 평가합니다. 다만, 여전히 음색을 다듬을 필요는 있습니다. 패턴 또한 잘 들리는 음 위주로 배치해야 하며, 다른 여러 보면을 참고하면서 제작하는 것이 좋습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다! (Thank you for your hard work.)
[Google Translate]
(글쎄,이 노래를 리메이크해야 할까?)
귀하의 인상과 조언에 감사드립니다. 정말 감사합니다.
사실이 노래를 만들 때는이 노래에 담았어야 할 음향 효과가 완전히 부족했습니다. 아파서 우는 아이들과 부모님 / 선생님이 잔인하게 벌을주었습니다. 그런데 그 음향 효과로 인해이 노래가 실격 될 수 있다고 생각해서 추가하지 않기로 결정했습니다. 그러나 내가 그것을 리메이크 할 수 있다면 (BMS가 아닌), 확실히 노래에 추가 할 것입니다.
긍정적 인 에너지가 당신의 것입니다.
P / s : 왜 제 165 번보다 더 높은 점수로이 항목을 득점했는지 궁금합니다.
Because it is more satisfying to play as a rhythm game as a self-styled BMS enthusiast. I truly like the melody (except the 16 bits melody at #039-#046, need improvements) and the theme that this work represents. BPM 64-259 is also a distinct tempo change, that's been implemented only in this work.
ジャンル名が...。
Another(14)から意図的に判定難易度をHardに置きましたね。一般的には、判定難易度(#Rank)は、同じ曲では、のように配置設けなのに、ここでは、「Violence」を表現したい感じが伝わります。
ただし...Piano SoloやDrum Solo(または他の音色との簡単な組み合わせ)を中心としたHyper見ると、この懐かしかった。
製作お疲れ様でした。
翻訳機を使用していました。
プレイ、インプレッションありがとうございます。強く感謝しています。
あなたをがっかりさせてしまったこと、本当に申し訳ありませんでした。この曲は本当に成分が不足していました。そして特に7ヶ月前にこれを作り始めた時も、私は何をしていたのかとガッカリしていました。

evaluated normal chart,
but i'd better to say that judgerank hard + slow scroll + stair and scratch, even from the start, is really 'unacceptable brutality.'
default 750/750
music 45/100
chart 60/100
movie 0/50
total 855/1000
What can I say now...
Anyway, thank you for your play and impression. I truly appreciate it. And I wish you positive!